Monday, November 23, 2009

せんりゆう by David san and Hien



ヤマカンジ
みねはどちらが
ありますか。
(Kanji Mountain
Where does your peak
lie?)
  • The Katakana of this poem depicts ヤマカンジ as a name, not to be confused with mountain and kanji as two separate words.

スコシあり
オオキイよちで
たちました
(Little ant
In a big world
You stand)
  • The use of Kanji in this poem was meant to emphasize size difference and extremes. It shows that despite the size of the ant relative to the world, it still stands tall.

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ほしのどか
エイエンのなか
あいましょお
(Quiet star
In eternity
We shall meet)



  • The use of Katakana in this poem is to depict eternity as a unique structure, as a different entity from both the speaker and the star in the poem, neither of which will last in the grand scheme of things.



シチスリク
くにのほうがく
しりません
(City slicker
Country law
You do not understand)
  • The Katakana and Hiragana of this poem compares the city slicker as a thing apart, believing that he is superior when in fact he is just different, and that there are some pieces which at their core are too far apart to overcome. The use of Katakana here, then, is twofold: it is used to mimic the English, and it is used to convey that core difference between the two through the very way the words are written.


かたかなと
カタカナがどう
わかります。
(Katakana and
Hiragana, how do I
understand?)
  • The Katakana here is the word Hiragana, and the word Katakana is written in Hiragana, just to show that there are no formal rules in the end of it all, but it is up to the poet to decide.

7 comments:

Elena Gredjakina said...

こんいしわ!

とてもおもしろい せんりゅうですね!
わたしは ヘインさんの せんりゅうが わかります。
じゃ また。

tk chang said...

いいせんりゅうですね!
こうみゅうなおつかいです!
ひらがなとかたがなをかきましだね!

Maureen Stimola said...

ここにたくさんきれいなはいくがありますよ! These are all so lovely. The country law/city slicker one is a bit confusing, but the rest are so clear!

Excellent use of katakana - you write japanese poems like a pro. ;)

サイモン said...

Anything that references A Bug's Life passes in my book. Also when I first read エイエン, I thought it was alien. Where did you find this spelling of the word? It seems a little strange, but maybe it originated from another language. ヤマカンジ was my favorite by far.

サイモン said...

Anything that references A Bug's Life passes in my book. Also when I first read エイエン, I thought it was alien. Where did you find this spelling of the word? It seems a little strange, but maybe it originated from another language. ヤマカンジ was my favorite by far.

Qinglanチンラン said...

It's strange.I 'm sure I had commented on these せんりゅう before...Anyway,そのせんりゅうがとてもすきです。あなたたちはせんりゅうが上手です!

Hien said...

ありがとうございます!
yea i couldn't resist picture addition ..